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JuLiEt
Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 44
Abbotsford,British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 1999-07-03 02:57 PM


You drive me crazy.

The sound of your voice
So soft and sweet,
Just makes me shiver
From head to feet.

Your beautiful eyes,
Looking straight into mine.
My god, I’m very lucky,
You are so fine.

You are so sweet,
Too sweet for me.
I am the King,
You are my Queen.

Life without you,
Isn’t life at all.
And if you weren’t around,
My world would be so small.

I need you in life,
I cannot lose you.
And if I did for good?
I’d be in the saddest mood.

I want to be with you,
Till the end of time.
Hey there baby,
Do you mind?

I think about you,
Every night and day.
I love you baby,
Thanks for being with me.

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~*JuLiEt*~

© Copyright 1999 JuLiEt - All Rights Reserved
Aly
Junior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 35

1 posted 1999-07-04 09:17 PM


Hey! That wuz really good! Everything rhymes! I always have trouble getting things to rhyme and also sound right.You r truly gifted.
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