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evolution
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ma, usa


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pain i have never known
sprung from my only joy
all alone
i ache for you
trying to find myself
lost in a labryinth of emotion
i dont know what i feel
i wish i didn't feel
i wish i never found love
love wont wait for me
love will not find love
love forms a marriage with hurt
and i am trapped
searching for hope
engulfed by despair
this spectrum of feelings
passes through transparent me
limp,lifeless and shallow
drowning in an emotional suicide
striving to find myself
who am i
what are you
the realization i lost you
is hard to imagine
if i could just shed this skin and start new
it would be so easy
but you have squeezed the life, the love out of me
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JuLiEt
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since 06-29-99
Posts 44
Abbotsford,British Columbia, C


1 posted 07-03-99 02:29 PM       View Profile for JuLiEt   Email JuLiEt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JuLiEt's Home Page   View IP for JuLiEt

This poem is great, really hits home with a lot of people in bad relationships. Wonderfully done.

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~*JuLiEt*~
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Hurricane Alley


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Welcome to the family! Hope you enjoy your time here. There is a lot of raw emotion in your poem! I await more posts from you!


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that's the way it is, yeah
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