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DreamEvil
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0 posted 1999-07-03 03:02 AM




All for us, Time is lost.
Nothing meaning something to those condemned abyss.
Tim is nothing, the game of life we should not play.
Time is not, at end, lost it will be always.

Time, the arch experience leads us,
Through which gleams the unraveled, incomplete, thought.
We be nothing but what Time, for us has wrought.
Something, a hope to those returned from all this.

Time, for us, is lost for all.
Everything means nothing to those who exist.
Time is something, the game stays for all to play.
Time is not, at end, begin another day.


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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.


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Genea
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1 posted 1999-07-03 12:38 PM


who is Tim [1st stanza, 3rd line? Think u mean 'time']
Alwye
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2 posted 1999-08-01 12:12 PM


So true, Dream. Another gem buried in the depths..

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks



Gentle Soul
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3 posted 1999-08-01 12:38 PM


I like it Dream.. so true.. *hugs*

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