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Alysia
Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa

0 posted 1999-07-03 02:54 AM


Ode to sadness
Mine ears harken
Thy sharp tongue
Dost thou know me
And saith not?
Pale fast mine face
Beguiles sweet tears
And mine heart--
What remains,
Doth bleed in
Bittersweet
Agony.

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~ Alysia*

© Copyright 1999 Alysia - All Rights Reserved
jfreak
Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA
1 posted 1999-07-03 03:05 PM


Such Shakespeareanesque (if that is a word) You have written a really great poem here. I liked it alot and I like your use of old english. I works really good. If you know how to use it, which you do.

JFreak

Alain DeLaCendres
Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119
Ohio
2 posted 1999-07-03 03:57 PM


Truly beautiful. You used the Old English perfectly. Great images also.
Alysia
Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa
3 posted 1999-07-03 06:48 PM


danke. (thanks, in german) I love anything to do with Shakespeare including such wonderful speech used in the period. thanks again. and jfreak...i still love your poetry!

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~ Alysia*

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