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True Love Doth Make My Soul Bleed.

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Alysia
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since 06-26-99
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0 posted 07-03-99 02:54 AM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

Ode to sadness
Mine ears harken
Thy sharp tongue
Dost thou know me
And saith not?
Pale fast mine face
Beguiles sweet tears
And mine heart--
What remains,
Doth bleed in
Bittersweet
Agony.

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~ Alysia*
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jfreak
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since 06-17-99
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1 posted 07-03-99 03:05 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Such Shakespeareanesque (if that is a word) You have written a really great poem here. I liked it alot and I like your use of old english. I works really good. If you know how to use it, which you do.

JFreak
Alain DeLaCendres
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2 posted 07-03-99 03:57 PM       View Profile for Alain DeLaCendres   Email Alain DeLaCendres   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alain DeLaCendres

Truly beautiful. You used the Old English perfectly. Great images also.
Alysia
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american falls, idaho usa


3 posted 07-03-99 06:48 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

danke. (thanks, in german) I love anything to do with Shakespeare including such wonderful speech used in the period. thanks again. and jfreak...i still love your poetry!

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