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The Sin (a companion to The Impenitent One")

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Moonlight
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0 posted 07-03-99 02:41 AM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight


"Give me my sin again"
She said with a sultry grin.
I need to feel like before-
The heat, the thrill, the icey chill-
I want more.
All I desire is in your eye
I long to hear your passionate cry.
I need to feel like before
The rage, the kiss, the ardent bliss-
I want more.
All I can taste is your honey skin
I long to feel your lusty sin.
I need to feel like before-
The pain, the pulse, the fevered impulse-
I want more.
All I need you give to me
I must have the spirit to set me free.
I need to feel like before
The love, the longing, the sense of belonging
I want more.

(this is a prequel, sequel, companion to the one I posted earlier "The Impenitent One"... I'm not positive of its title as of yet, but for now it suits it well. They are two of a maybe short series...I'll be looking forward to seeing what everyone thinks!...~m~)

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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-03-99 03:06 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I like the erotic thread, I can almost feel your heart beating.

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2 posted 07-03-99 08:40 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Moonlight, this has a wonder pace and tempo to create the mood of the poem. Part of a series, you say? I want to see more!
Moonlight
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3 posted 07-03-99 10:09 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

Thank You Dreamie
And
Balladeer - thank you also! I wondered how well the tempo would do. Its kind of strange, but I thought it would be something different for a change....
Thanks for the comments!
DreamEvil
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4 posted 07-05-99 11:40 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

And this as well.

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Enrique
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Wonderful Poem, I love it.
sea_of_okc
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Wow Moonlight! I really like this one... the repetition of "I want more" works very well. Reminds me of my ex, I think that is her lifelong motto "I want more"
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