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Artur Hawkwing
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0 posted 07-03-99 12:23 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Where indestructible memories flow,
where you flow, my love,
my hands hold invisible air,
a whispering of a love lost.

Brighter than Venus your eyes glow,
with love more kind than summer,
your eyes are memories of my eyes,
those immortal eyes that were deep pools.

An eye is known to consume the soul,
your eyes are whirlpools which drown time
with the youth of eternal summer,
as the wildness is full of innocence.

Your questions prove my nonexistence,
the void which fills me with longing
for the perfect friend and the sea beyond
where the sand are numerous as the stars.

A tiara I place at your head, my queen,
thinking of your beautiful face
and the look that says you do not suspense
how much I love you for who you are.

There is no barrier, no strongwall,
only understanding between our eyes,
and words will not come out,
and I face tomorrow afraid as usual.

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Artur Hawkwing.... 'The grave is no bar to my call.' Horn of Valere
© Copyright 1999 Artur Hawkwing - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-03-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Powerful! Sorry I missed this when you first logged on!
Lil Angel
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2 posted 07-04-99 02:29 AM       View Profile for Lil Angel   Email Lil Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lil Angel

Wow... a very good poem....your use of words is touching....


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"Consider the past and you shall know the future."
DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-04-99 02:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Elegance on paper.

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I would devour you save that you would no longer be there.

Alain DeLaCendres
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4 posted 07-04-99 02:49 AM       View Profile for Alain DeLaCendres   Email Alain DeLaCendres   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alain DeLaCendres

I liked the idea of the eyes conveying so many thoughts and emotions. That is a belief that I myself think is very true. The eyes hold many secrets...Great poem Artur.

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Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie.
Artur Hawkwing
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5 posted 07-05-99 01:05 AM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Poet deVine, you have brightened my day by doing the simple or not-so-simple task of replying to my poems, and this extends to the others too.

Alain - A very kind explanation of how you understood the part about eyes conveying images. And happy fourth of July to you...
 
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