Isn't it somehow strange that though we often fear the storm it is what brings the new beginnings.....your poem captured this reality wonderfully..."For when the sun breaks free, I can finally see..." (the line of one of my own on the same subject.)
------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
To catch a fleeting thought and tie it to a storm to convey the power of feelings at that moment was inspirational. (The fact that thunder was actually rolling over my head as I read this work made the impact even more clear )
Feel the rumble hear the roar of thunder at your minds door I read the power in your pain your words will forever reign
Abbotsford,British Columbia, C
Hi! I really loved this poem. Short and to the point, and yet nothing is lacking in depth. My sister who is also a writer told me once "you shouldn't have to explain the poem, it should explain itself". I really could not only understand what you were saying, but could also feel what you were saying. Thankyou for sharing.