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Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA

0 posted 1999-07-02 03:03 PM


I thought this time it would be different between you and me,
But once again you’ve proved, you can’t let her be.
Now I sit here by myself, holding onto pain,
As I listen to the rain calling out your name.
A cloud of tears I’ve cried, since you said goodbye.

You told me it was over, told me she had gone away.
But you made a choice, that was all you would say;
The day you turned from me when you left on the train.
All I could do was listen to the rain calling out your name.
A cloud of tears I’ve cried, since you said goodbye.

My life will go on
I WILL survive again
But when the showers start,
I find that’s when I listen to the rain calling out your name.
A cloud of tears I’ve cried, since you said goodbye.

© Copyright 1999 Genea - All Rights Reserved
Krystal
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA
1 posted 1999-07-02 03:18 PM


Very nice... I can relate. Good work!

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA
2 posted 1999-07-02 04:25 PM


Thanks for the comment!
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