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An Imaginary Line |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
with the standard breathing room of 20 inches you enter my space eclipsing my heart with a grin and in my mind I see us dancing holding hands in the rain laughing on sundays kissing under midnight all facts all figures all dreams belong to you I wonder- do you know the power you wield? closer to you now (more than anyone else) I still sit outside your proximity and still wait for the line to be crossed. ------------------ And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda |
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Krystal Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140Shelton,WA USA |
Ohhhhh.... I love this one! ------------------ Shannon D. Montgomery ("Krystal") |
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ac Member
since 1999-06-17
Posts 129Cayey, PR - USA |
Wow...heartfelt and moving...well done... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Not a hair out of place. Perfect! |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
Aw...well, shucks guys... thanks...  ::shuffling feet::: -Christina |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
sweet romantic Love it!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a good one, glad I tripped on it |
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