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An Imaginary Line

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Christina Myers
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0 posted 07-02-99 08:39 AM       View Profile for Christina Myers   Email Christina Myers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Christina Myers's Home Page   View IP for Christina Myers

with the standard breathing room
of 20 inches
you enter my space

eclipsing my heart
with a grin

and in my mind I see us dancing
holding hands in the rain
laughing on sundays

kissing under midnight

all facts all figures
all dreams
belong to you

I wonder- do you know the power you wield?

closer to you
now
(more than anyone else)
I still sit outside your proximity
and still wait
for the line to be crossed.

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And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda
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Krystal
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1 posted 07-02-99 04:15 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

Ohhhhh.... I love this one!

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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ac
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2 posted 07-02-99 11:08 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

Wow...heartfelt and moving...well done...
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3 posted 07-02-99 11:12 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Not a hair out of place. Perfect!
Christina Myers
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4 posted 07-03-99 10:10 AM       View Profile for Christina Myers   Email Christina Myers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Christina Myers's Home Page   View IP for Christina Myers

Aw...well, shucks guys... thanks...

::shuffling feet:::


-Christina
Genea
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5 posted 07-03-99 12:32 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

sweet
romantic
Love it!!
passing shadows
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this is a good one, glad I tripped on it
 
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