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Cinderella
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since 06-23-99
Posts 157
Arizona


0 posted 07-02-99 04:01 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cinderella

You are my best friend and always will be,
We shared so many things on so many days
I thank you for everything and choosing me
We are so similar in our thinking ways.

Too bad we live so many miles apart
For it would be so wonderful and nice,
Your being close would make my heart
So happy and warm there is no price...

When friendships come only once in awhile,
And you my dear have come into my life
Especially when you make me laugh or smile.
It would be a thrill to be your loving wife!

Looking foward to the next fifty years
Of a devoted relationship filled with love.
Knowingly this would last with no fears
For God would watch over us from above.

We have expressed our love to each other
And this could go on forever I am sure,
Wouldn't it be nice to be a father and mother?
For marriage is sacred and surely will endure.

So many things during our years on this earth
Bringing up children and teaching them right
We can together watch while I give birth
Wouldn't that be a marvelous, glorious sight?

We can share something that takes only two,
So simple it seems but nature will help us!
We can start as soon as we say "I do"
For I am old-fashioned and this is a must.

We'll promise to love, honor and obey
Exchanging rings will not be amiss
As couples do on their wedding day
And then we will seal our vows with a kiss!




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jfreak
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since 06-17-99
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Yuma, AZ, USA


1 posted 07-02-99 04:12 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Bravo to oldfashionedness. I am a twenty year old male in the Marines and I am proud to say that I am still a virgin. I plan on staying that way until I seal "MY" vows with a kiss. Keep your standards high. Don't let them fall. Your poem is great. Flows beautifully, rhyme and scheme are great. Keep up the great work.

JFreak
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