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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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0 posted 1999-07-02 03:51 AM


Separated by distance and this mass of metal and wire, if I said it made me love you less or lose desire, my dear, it would make me a liar.

Distance makes the heart grow fonder, it also makes my love grow stronger. While I desire to touch your face, it wasn't looks that I fell for in the first place.

Your heart, your truth, your time, all entered me like a dream sublime and washed away all the decay from this twisted soul of mine.

Across time and space to my PC I race, always fearing I'll lose my endearing traits that make me hope and slightly cope with the pain
Of being apart.

You do understand my love, we're helpless victims of Cyberlove

©1999 DreamEvil
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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.



[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-09-99).]

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one voice
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 38
Billings, MT USA
1 posted 1999-07-02 03:55 AM


what an intriguing surprise! I like I like!

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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2 posted 1999-07-03 01:32 AM


Bringing this up, too.
Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA
3 posted 1999-07-03 01:40 AM


i know the feeling. it is like being a victim. you feel so helpless in the distance situation ....

another great work, Dreamie....

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
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4 posted 1999-07-03 02:54 AM


I know you do.
elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
California
5 posted 1999-07-13 10:45 PM


tu, cosi lontano, seppure ormai cosi vicina...only via the net can such sweet love grow
IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 253

6 posted 1999-07-13 11:17 PM


If I may offer my two cents!

unknown sky

my feet carried my heart down a path
I'd not traversed before
the air carried a scent, wild and free
I knew not what it foretold
or what I should find
if my course continued so
the sky cracked with thunder's ire
the earth shook to it's very core
the seas creatures gave rise to their haunting refrain
as rocks and trees, mountains and waters
all chorused in a melodic chime
the winds spake your name to my heart
before my mind e'er knew it's exsistence
my lips longed for the sweet fruit of your kiss
though my eyes had ne'er drowned in the tides of yours
the breeze whispered your love to me
on the currents of an unknown sky



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Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads.....Henry David Thoreau

DreamEvil
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7 posted 1999-07-13 11:47 PM


Wow! Puts you in a whole new light.
DreamEvil
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8 posted 1999-07-13 11:48 PM


Wow! Puts you in a whole new light.
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