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one voice
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since 06-29-99
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 07-02-99 02:46 AM       View Profile for one voice   Email one voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for one voice

I long for your smooth subtleties,
and your desire for intellect.
I long for your honor of femininity
and your respect for emotion.
I long to love your gentleness, your kindness, your tenderness, your enthralling excitement!
I could sweetly lose myself.
Might your timing be so perfectly appropriate?
Would you be tender when I need tenderness?
Would you be serious when I need seriousness?
Would you be intellectual when I muxt voice my opinion?
All of these qualities I long to find...
I long for them to combine, creating this amazing equilibrium, and the result would coincidently equal: everything I've ever wanted in a man...
I would feel so pretty.
I would feel so sexy.
I would feel so honored and cherished...
Oh, when will you find me?

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James
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DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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1 posted 07-02-99 02:53 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This piece hits very close to home, it stirs up quite a hornet's nest. I thoroughly enjoy it.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

azblond
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since 07-01-99
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The Steamy Desert


2 posted 07-02-99 03:00 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Romeo, Romeo, can't you get here in time??!!I truly enjoyed it onevoice, let me know if you find Him!
one voice
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Posts 38
Billings, MT USA


3 posted 07-02-99 04:00 AM       View Profile for one voice   Email one voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for one voice

Thank you to the both of you... az, Trust me, if I find him, EVERYONE will know! lol!

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James
Balladeer
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since 06-05-99
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


4 posted 07-02-99 09:54 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

When you do find him, let me be the first to crown him "luckiest man alive". Wonderfully written.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


5 posted 07-02-99 12:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

If you find a man like that, may I clone him so I can have one too (Balladeer - isn't this YOU?)
Fred Hobbs
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since 06-08-99
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Tallahassee, Florida, US


6 posted 07-02-99 08:39 PM       View Profile for Fred Hobbs   Email Fred Hobbs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fred Hobbs's Home Page   View IP for Fred Hobbs

one voice,

This is a great poem and a great statement. You are certainly very talented and resourceful. If you find him and he has a sister...........

sandman
one voice
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Posts 38
Billings, MT USA


7 posted 07-04-99 02:33 AM       View Profile for one voice   Email one voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for one voice

Hey y'all! If I find him, there will plenty to go around! lol
Kelly
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8 posted 07-05-99 12:36 PM       View Profile for Kelly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kelly

Thanks for the poem. It made me cry. I found the man of my dreams but God has taken him home. Thanks for bringing him back for a moment.
 
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