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Between Dawn And Dusk

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Alain DeLaCendres
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since 07-02-99
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Ohio


0 posted 07-02-99 02:33 AM       View Profile for Alain DeLaCendres   Email Alain DeLaCendres   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alain DeLaCendres

The dawn moon
and the dusk sun
Were our most valued treasures.
With the dawn moon
came all of our dreams,
we could make them
and live them as we pleased.
In came the dusk sun
when the long day
was finally done
as we welcomed all that would come.

But it was all the things
that found us
between the dawn moon
and the dusk sun
That would most color our imaginations
and all that we were.
It was the things
between the dawn moon
and the dusk sun
that would shape
What was gone
and what was to come.
© Copyright 1999 Alain DeLaCendres - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 06-22-99
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1 posted 07-02-99 02:56 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very imaginative piece. Darkness and Light balanced.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-02-99 07:14 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. As you may see, we are in the midst of a Freedom frenzy....for the Fourth of July, Freedom poems keep getting moved to the top of line....

I wanted though, to comment on your poem and to welcome you to our group. I hope you enjoy your stay.

For some reason, this reminds me of the South.. old trees, moss covered... an old garden with fading roses...

Nice poem. I look forward to more!


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


3 posted 07-02-99 09:07 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The wording is almost magical, and feels like you've entered a new realm. Wonderful. Please submit many more.

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true

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