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Alicat
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Coastal Texas

0 posted 1999-07-01 07:29 PM


I enlisted in the Texas Army National Guard and entered basic training with D Co., 2/46 Inf Bt, Fort Knox, August 21, 1995. Due to one opinion, albiet a Colonel's, I was discharded. But still I try to serve this country best as I can.

MED200

In battlegear I see my friends
Marching down the road
My pack is in my war chest
I carry a heavier load

The Army says I cannot train
Or march or do PT
The doctor said of me asthma
But it's false, you see?

The Army said, "Be all you can be!"
And I ran that race
But now it seems I cannot even
Graduate this place

And when my friends play Rambo
Field training every day
I'll pack my gear and head for home
Alone upon my way

Alicat
10/4/95

© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-07-01 07:40 PM


Sorry, Alicat! But it's good you still try to serve this country. The poem was really good!
Nan
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2 posted 1999-07-04 03:02 PM


Let's hear it one more time
For Independence Day


Munda
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3 posted 2000-03-05 11:59 AM


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