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Shattered Dreams

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azblond
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The Steamy Desert


0 posted 07-01-99 07:07 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for azblond

Shattered Dreams

My heart before broken, now is shattered
You made me believe I was all that mattered
You gave me romance, I gave you trust
I showed you love, you showed me lust
In a world full of games you win them all
For just how hard you made me fall
I honored the vows I spoke to you
You made me see words can be untrue
You say you were confused, a little unsure
When did it become clear? When you met her?
And now you are worried about me it seems
After you went and shattered all my dreams
Let me clear this up just one time
Don’t worry darling, I will be fine
I see things more clearly now thanks to you
My heartache shows what love wouldn’t let through
The reality is that from the start
You loved me with your body, I loved you with my heart.

© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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In the space between moments


1 posted 07-23-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So very true with a lot of men these days. I was sifting though the older works, and this is a great piece! Nice job!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
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I agree, very nice job done here.
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