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You Belong to Me

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Elizabeth
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0 posted 07-01-99 03:09 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 07-01-99).]

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 07-27-99).]

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 11-04-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-01-99 07:49 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Almost made my tears fill with tears out of envy for my own personal reasons.
Elizabeth
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2 posted 07-01-99 07:59 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Thank you Artur, for your kind words. Oh, and by the way, I love your e-mail address.
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3 posted 07-01-99 08:06 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Beautifully written about true love. Cherish every day.
Elizabeth
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4 posted 08-23-99 03:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Just wanted to see what anyone else might think of this one, so I'm bringing it back up to the top. And thanks, Lost Dreamer!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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Well.... now that he's had nearly two months with you..... is he still there??? lol ... a very sweet poem.

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6 posted 08-23-99 04:14 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Thanks, Long John.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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7 posted 08-25-99 09:47 AM       View Profile for traveler   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for traveler

Elizabeth, what a lovely poem.I know you did not write it for me. Still, it is eerie to read my dream described so accurately by someone else. A shiver down my spine. Thanks.

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8 posted 08-25-99 07:41 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Wow! How nice, traveler-would you mind telling a little more about your dream, if it isn't too personal? I'll say this-even I didn't know how close this was to my own life until after I wrote it.

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"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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9 posted 08-25-99 09:48 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This cpuld be the first time I've seen the line "He willingly gave himself to her". Normally it's the other way around. I love it!
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Wonderfully beautiful work, Elizabeth!!! I love it!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller


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This is the reason we should all 'surf' into the archives a little. Gems like these all too often are read quickly and replaced by 'multiple' postings. I love this, Elizabeth! Beautiful and tender!
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12 posted 08-25-99 10:37 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I agree with Poet deVine. This is a beautiful piece, and really touching! I loved it.
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" All of the above" Elizabeth..I loved it.

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Nice Job Elizabeth
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15 posted 08-26-99 01:05 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Thank you guys so much...*blush*

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
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Yes definitely very beautiful poetry. Romantic and intimate. Thank you for sharing it with us Elizabeth
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My dream? Well, if I can find a way to get a meter and rhyme to it. Maybe in the prose section.Thanks for asking, Elizabeth.

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Thanks, Talon!

Traveler-I'll be looking!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."
 
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