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Elizabeth

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0 posted 1999-07-01 03:09 PM

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Artur Hawkwing
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1 posted 1999-07-01 07:49 PM

Almost made my tears fill with tears out of envy for my own personal reasons.

Elizabeth

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2 posted 1999-07-01 07:59 PM

Thank you Artur, for your kind words. Oh, and by the way, I love your e-mail address.

Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 1999-07-01 08:06 PM

Beautifully written about true love. Cherish every day.

Elizabeth

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4 posted 1999-08-23 03:28 PM

Just wanted to see what anyone else might think of this one, so I'm bringing it back up to the top. And thanks, Lost Dreamer!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 1999-08-23 03:32 PM

Well.... now that he's had nearly two months with you..... is he still there??? lol ... a very sweet poem.

hugs

Elizabeth

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6 posted 1999-08-23 04:14 PM

Thanks, Long John.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

traveler
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7 posted 1999-08-25 09:47 AM

Elizabeth, what a lovely poem.I know you did not write it for me. Still, it is eerie to read my dream described so accurately by someone else. A shiver down my spine. Thanks.

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Elizabeth

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8 posted 1999-08-25 07:41 PM

Wow! How nice, traveler-would you mind telling a little more about your dream, if it isn't too personal? I'll say this-even I didn't know how close this was to my own life until after I wrote it.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Balladeer

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9 posted 1999-08-25 09:48 PM

This cpuld be the first time I've seen the line "He willingly gave himself to her". Normally it's the other way around. I love it!

Alwye

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In the space between moments

10 posted 1999-08-25 09:56 PM

Wonderfully beautiful work, Elizabeth!!! I love it!

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*Krista Knutson*

I see the world through the loving eyes of my heart, and suffer the pain of unfulfilled visions. -- Daniel L. Miller

Poet deVine

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11 posted 1999-08-25 10:27 PM

This is the reason we should all 'surf' into the archives a little. Gems like these all too often are read quickly and replaced by 'multiple' postings. I love this, Elizabeth! Beautiful and tender!

WhtDove
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12 posted 1999-08-25 10:37 PM

I agree with Poet deVine. This is a beautiful piece, and really touching! I loved it.

Dark Angel
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13 posted 1999-08-26 07:30 AM

" All of the above" Elizabeth..I loved it.

Dark Angel

hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 1999-08-26 11:46 AM

Nice Job Elizabeth

Elizabeth

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15 posted 1999-08-26 01:05 PM

Thank you guys so much...*blush*

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

Talon
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16 posted 1999-08-26 01:19 PM

Yes definitely very beautiful poetry. Romantic and intimate. Thank you for sharing it with us Elizabeth

traveler
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17 posted 1999-08-26 08:38 PM

My dream? Well, if I can find a way to get a meter and rhyme to it. Maybe in the prose section.Thanks for asking, Elizabeth.

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Elizabeth

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18 posted 1999-08-27 11:29 AM

Thanks, Talon!

Traveler-I'll be looking!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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