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Falling Asleep

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one voice
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since 06-29-99
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Billings, MT USA


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Hidden asunder that peaceful blackness
'neath the blanket of comfort and down
lies that euphoric body
relieved from exhaustion.

Angels in white fly down from the moon-
hover at the bedside and kiss the eyes,
Leaving one able to fade away
from reality;
To drift away in to
sweet slumber.

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~one voice~

***For myself I Live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression
of that. -Henry James
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invertigo18
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since 06-14-99
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Prairieville, LA., USA


1 posted 07-01-99 02:43 PM       View Profile for invertigo18   Email invertigo18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for invertigo18

Well written, it's a very suggestive poem. It could be more, metered, but the idea is cool. Keep up the good work.

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Luke Cakalic
 
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