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azblond
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since 1999-07-01
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The Steamy Desert

0 posted 1999-07-01 12:59 PM


In moments of desperation, our hearts often reveal things that we dare not believe we could be capable of doing until we have reached that final breaking point. The words below are the escape from reality, the triump of living through words what we dare not do in life.

Fallen Angel

It's falling so fast
The sound so loud
Heavens tears come
From above in a cloud
Stop this torment
End this pain
Yet the only answer
Is the sound of rain
It is his fault
For he swore to love me
Then he showed his lie
When I found the key
His whole other life
In another place
So all of his mistakes
I did erase
He called me Angel
And we'll both pay for his sin
I for his life
He for giving in
It's falling fast
The blood from his heart
And about the same time
Rain did start
Goodbye my love
I'll see you there
Here comes the lightning
Out goes the chair
Swinging, I'm swinging
And now I will fly
Tears fall like rain
As angels cry.


[This message has been edited by azblond (edited 07-01-99).]

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1 posted 1999-07-01 02:57 PM


Glad to have you here, azblond! Your poetry is very good. And very sad.
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