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one voice
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since 1999-06-29
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Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-07-01 05:41 AM


I saw the ocean
and I touched the water.
I felt the sand beneath my feet
and the sun upon my face.
I felt my heart ache as I wished you were near and I longed for your tender and
passionate embrace.
I sought the wings of a mechanical bird.
I held on tight as I flew over the ocean.
I thought a lot about you and the way we once were...
And I thanked you for not letting me die.
Maybe there's hope, maybe it's over,
But my love you is greater than the ocean.

© Copyright 1999 one voice - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-01 05:50 AM


Sad to me. Is that what you were trying to get across?

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.


Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-07-31 11:18 PM


Very beautiful, one voice. Another from the archives.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks



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