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WhenDovesCry
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since 1999-06-29
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0 posted 1999-07-01 01:11 AM


When you reach your lowest point
When the world seems so dark
You want to give it all up
And never look back again

You pray to whoever is listening
You wish on the brightest star
For one more chance to make it right
For one saving grace to shine

The soul can be broken
For it's more fragile than you know
But it also can be mended
And be stronger than ever before

Then the sun begins to rise
From a horizon thought long gone
Hope begins to show its face
Gentle and strong, visions of the past

The soul can be broken
For it's more fragile than you know
But it also can be mended
And be stronger than ever before

Reach out your hand, feel what was lost
The darkness is drowning
And is forever replaced by a love



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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 1999-07-31 11:22 PM


Very uplifting..

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks



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