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evolution
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 22
ma, usa

0 posted 1999-06-30 09:35 PM


no perception
afraid of what i am suspecting
immune to it all
headed for a fall
everything before, is now no more
can i now pretend
that you are just a friend
you have your life while i have mine
everything is fine?
i wish i could let, myself forget
you hurt me more than you will ever know
you hurt me more than i will ever show
hiding the pain that engulfs me
hoping that you will never see
my heart bleeds
my words plead
my soul dies
my eyes cry
its all for you
i dont know what to do
it could never last
what we had in the past
if only not for fate
maybe we could have been great

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-07-01 05:58 AM


I like this snippet.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.


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