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Nar'el, narel burns this night

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Artur Hawkwing
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0 posted 06-30-99 08:05 PM       View Profile for Artur Hawkwing   Email Artur Hawkwing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Artur Hawkwing

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
'fire star' it means, although bright,
through folklore I look above
through yearless eyes at stars I love;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
golden stars of fire, of ire, of light,
where elvish dreams doth rest
above rimming moon shining acrest;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
'round green trees, 'round the sky,
where midnight masses gather
and sing of things proud and fair;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
flame in the void, light in darkness
amidst red rocks lifeless
and river glimmering rideless;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
a river in the sky, a stairway to heaven,
amidst dank pebbles in the stream
as moonlight strikes the land with a beam;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
in the ancient tongue of Elvish maidens,
from Isildur, 'dark moon'
to 'Queen of the Stars', Elbereth;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
a remnant of times lost, of old,
of music played by harps, of celestial songs,
the stars which conquer all, still longs;

Nar'el, nar'el burns this night,
Nar'el, nar'el burns this night.

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Nan
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1 posted 06-30-99 09:41 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This is really very interesting, Artur - I can't wait to read more - Keep posting...
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2 posted 07-01-99 11:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Very good! I like it a lot. It flows well.
 
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