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A message on the wind

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Colin
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0 posted 06-30-99 04:15 PM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Colin

Wind, blow across the ocean
Fly swiftly over land
And take for me this message
I know she'll understand

A message for my true love
Reminding her I care
And though my body's absent
My thoughts are always there

If you cannot find her
Ask your friend the sun
Say that you are seeking
The other half of one

When you find my darling
Blow a kiss from me
And tell her once the waiting's through
We'll be forever free

Remind her of a pledge we made
A pledge I still hold dear
A promise that will matter
For all time and a year

And tell her we're together
Even when apart
For at the beach in February
We joined souls and hearts
© Copyright 1999 Colin Ramage - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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1 posted 06-30-99 04:45 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Nicely done. I particularly enjoyed the third stanza.
Lost Dreamer
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2 posted 06-30-99 04:48 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Very nice, I really liked it.
ac
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3 posted 06-30-99 05:23 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

Beautiful work...welcome...
elvira
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4 posted 07-16-99 02:30 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

lovely.....hope you will be posting more?


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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


azblond
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The Steamy Desert


5 posted 07-16-99 03:57 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Sigh...How wonderful this message, I hope it reaches her and touches her heart as deeply as it touched mine!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...


poetFemmeFatale
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6 posted 07-27-99 10:14 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Ah, I loved how your thoughts just clicked out so nicely especially in the first part of this....everything had such a nice rhythm...and wow your thoughts were beautiful!!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 08-30-99 09:35 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Yeah it's me, back here in the "dark dusty corners" of the forum....doing a bit of post summer cleaning, and I'm finding the most beautiful gems among the spider webs......hhmmmm....This is absolutely a lover's treasure....ENJOY ! To all who missed it the first time, here is ERIC !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale


PhaerieChild
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Aloha, Oregon


8 posted 08-30-99 10:23 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

I love this! It is simple, yet eloquent. Really speaks to the heart.

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America the beautiful


9 posted 08-30-99 10:50 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Yet another reason to look through the archives and find what's been buried there...Hope she liked this one, Eric!

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."

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