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sea_of_okc
Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-06-30 02:07 PM


If I could tear out my heart
And show it to you
Would you be able to see
That my love is true?

If I could split my skull
And hand to you my brain
Would you see my thoughts of you
And put it back again?

If I could only separate
My body from my soul
Would you see I'm incomplete
And need you to be whole?

If I could be with you now
And our lips could touch
Would you feel in that first kiss
That I love you so very much?

I cannot do these things for you
My words are all I can give
But I promise if you'll have me
All my life for you I'll live


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Steven Seaman
A burden shared is a burden lightened
A life shared is a life enriched


© Copyright 1999 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Newguy
Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 36
Moultrie, GA, USA
1 posted 1999-06-30 02:31 PM


I really like this poem!! It is written very well and reminds me of....never mind.

Congratulations and keep up the good work!

seaslady
Junior Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 43

2 posted 1999-06-30 02:44 PM


Your words stir my soul....
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