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Tommi Backholm
New Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 6
Vaasa, Finland

0 posted 1999-06-30 07:48 AM


Does it really matter
If the summer don´t come
Or the grass don´t grow
Or the snow don´t meld

Does it really matter
If the fire don´t burn
Or the wind don´t blow
Or the ice don´t freeze

Does it really matter
Because

You know that i care you
You know that i think you daily
You know that i want to be near you
You know that i love you

So
Does it really matter


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i would like, if somebody fix my errors to my email.

[This message has been edited by Tommi Backholm (edited 06-30-99).]

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Genea
Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA
1 posted 1999-06-30 09:02 AM


i liked your message but found your misspelled words/typos to be a distraction.
Tommi Backholm
New Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 6
Vaasa, Finland
2 posted 1999-06-30 09:06 AM


sorry about my broken english, i have little problems with it.
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