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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Mind Still Focused Steering wheel in hand eyes fixated on path mind focused to every detail. Detour ahead mind still focused. Knows the route so well nothing can distract. someone right behind wants to pass you car coming other way. Slowing down bump in road no more street lights on your own. Dark and dreary tree lined streets. Mind still focused. Can't retreat now halfway there. Large creature entering road brakes applied no where to go. Bridge ahead must pay toll no change found empty purse. Turn around find alternate route. Mind still focused. Back to center long way around. Snow starts falling whitening ground. Four wheel drive will get through cars stuck everywhere. Glistening branches ready to break. Up,up,up, have to go no other way. Mind still focused. Whiteout on top of hill can't see other side. Nearing destination five miles left to go. Tree uprooted sitting on house. Roads slippery needs some sand. Two miles left seeing headlights, there to close over yellow line on my side. |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I cannot believe no one has seen this! This is a wonderful work, Lost Dreamer! So intense! ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
where have you been hiding? i like it! ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
This is a really great piece... Lost Dreamer, thank god you have been found!!! mia |
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