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A Wedding Vow

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Lost Dreamer
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A Wedding Vow

I can see the sunlight in your eyes
radiating the beauty surrounding them.
I can hear wisdom in your voice
expressing the brilliance within you.
I can feel the tenderness from your touch
magically overcome me with long lasting
memories of your kindness.

I want to reach your inner soul
to make your heart bubble over
with happiness and love.
I want to bring to life your inner spirit
that's gravity pulls me toward your being.
I want to co-exist with you,
and share in all your ventures.
I want our passions to ignite
the world ablaze in harmony.

Let us shower the earth with gratitude
for the unification of two souls
in the presence of God
for the purpose of loving one another
till death do us part.
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Genea
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sweet
Lost Dreamer
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Genea, Thank-you for your response
ac
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Lost Dreamer...i do hope she said yes...with this vow, i know i would have melted in your arms...
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Thanks for the response ac. Just so you know Lost Dreamer is of the female variety and I wrote this after being married for 17 years.
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