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Insanity
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since 06-30-99
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Mars, Mars, Mars


0 posted 06-30-99 01:37 AM       View Profile for Insanity   Email Insanity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Insanity

My first post here was a response to Christina Myers "Birthday in Sedona"... reported to me by Nimrod the Hunter, I decided to join netpoets... and while writing my reply, My eyes were almost tearing, taking a trip down memory lane...

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Seven years gone by,
As I close my eyes,
and my mind flies back,
The first day I arrived,
Leo sitting on the fence,
Andee chatting on the meadow,
Welcoming me in with an open heart,
Five years later, I was striken with news,
And for the first time in ages,
And yet to happen again,
Tears streamed down my face,
For Leo and his wife to be,
The beautiful Andee,
Rammed to death by a driver drunken,
The day before I was to see them again,
In Sedona where the red rocks lie,
In Sedona where their spirits fly.
Seven years of memory do float by,

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*sniff*... Thanks for listening to my minds ramble down memory lane...
© Copyright 1999 Insanity - All Rights Reserved
Nimrod the Hunter
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since 06-10-99
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1 posted 06-30-99 02:11 AM       View Profile for Nimrod the Hunter   Email Nimrod the Hunter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nimrod the Hunter

Welcome, my splendid friend! I like the poem, quite akin of your talent.

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*sniff* takes a walk another way down memory lane.
Moonlight
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since 06-25-99
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA


2 posted 06-30-99 02:26 AM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

I especially like the last 3 lines, Insanity. Very moving...very peaceful even.
~m~
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


3 posted 06-30-99 02:38 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Insanity~

From one poet to another you'll understand why my reply will be short and sweet and to the point ~~~ WOW!!! and THANKS!!! look forward to reading your next work.
Thanks for walking down memory lane with me too

*******Augchic711*******
Nan
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since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


4 posted 06-30-99 08:33 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

A little Insanity around here is always welcome...


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Insanity
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since 06-30-99
Posts 10
Mars, Mars, Mars


5 posted 06-30-99 05:45 PM       View Profile for Insanity   Email Insanity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Insanity

Thanks you guys...
I like this place already, a big chance to open my heart ;-)

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Memories are precious,
Priceless, cannot be bought,
Yet they exist in abdundance,
Those we have and those yet to be found,
So abdundant, yet I value it,
more than Gold...

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Life is a struggle for humans to make more foolproof stuff, and for the universe to make more complete fools. I'm here, so the Universe won!

-*Insanity*-


Soleil
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since 06-12-99
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6 posted 06-30-99 05:48 PM       View Profile for Soleil   Email Soleil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil

good job, really liked those last three lines
ac
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since 06-17-99
Posts 132
Cayey, PR - USA


7 posted 06-30-99 05:56 PM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

Welcome...hope to see more of your work now that you've decided to join the rest of the insanity that takes place around here...you are welcome addition...
 
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