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Raven
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0 posted 06-30-99 01:27 AM       View Profile for Raven   Email Raven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Raven

Is that you gazing at the stars?
In awe of the beauty of the night?
The moon, so pale and bloodless
Is a vampire that roams in the dark.
Kneeling on your lawn, mesmerized
Do you ever feel that the stars are stealing you away?
I can feel them grasping my soul
Wishing I was somewhere else.
Make a wish, don't be afraid
If it comes true then you will know
That when the day of your death comes
You will forever grace the night sky.

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~
© Copyright 1999 Raven - All Rights Reserved
WhenDovesCry
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1 posted 06-30-99 01:51 AM       View Profile for WhenDovesCry   Email WhenDovesCry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhenDovesCry

i am in total awe....this expresses so much and is so beautiful...thank you for sharing it...
DreamEvil
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2 posted 06-30-99 02:32 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I am astounded by the depth of your verse, please, continue.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

Moonlight
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3 posted 06-30-99 02:36 AM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

beautiful!
Raven
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4 posted 06-30-99 06:27 PM       View Profile for Raven   Email Raven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Raven

Thank you for your kind words this poem is unfinished, until the remaining verses come to me.


*~*Raven*~*

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~
Deanna
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5 posted 06-30-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for Deanna   Email Deanna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Deanna

I can't wait until the other verses arrive! This is beautiful.
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