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Raven
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA

0 posted 1999-06-30 01:27 AM


Is that you gazing at the stars?
In awe of the beauty of the night?
The moon, so pale and bloodless
Is a vampire that roams in the dark.
Kneeling on your lawn, mesmerized
Do you ever feel that the stars are stealing you away?
I can feel them grasping my soul
Wishing I was somewhere else.
Make a wish, don't be afraid
If it comes true then you will know
That when the day of your death comes
You will forever grace the night sky.

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

© Copyright 1999 Raven - All Rights Reserved
WhenDovesCry
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 16
California, USA
1 posted 1999-06-30 01:51 AM


i am in total awe....this expresses so much and is so beautiful...thank you for sharing it...
DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-06-30 02:32 AM


I am astounded by the depth of your verse, please, continue.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.


Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA
3 posted 1999-06-30 02:36 AM


beautiful!
Raven
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since 1999-06-14
Posts 67
Hopewell Jct, New York, USA
4 posted 1999-06-30 06:27 PM


Thank you for your kind words this poem is unfinished, until the remaining verses come to me.


*~*Raven*~*

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"They sing the stories of the present, of people trapped in a shadow world" ~Charlotte Seley~

Deanna
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since 1999-06-27
Posts 7
WV, USA
5 posted 1999-06-30 10:20 PM


I can't wait until the other verses arrive! This is beautiful.
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