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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 06-30-99 01:13 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

Lisa your so good to me
I wish that you were here
Keep you quiet company
And always lend an ear

You promised that you'd hold me
And never let me go
You never should have told me
Cause now i have to know

Lisa I know you inspired
This sleepy autumn day
I wont let our love grow tired
Soon I'll be on my way

© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-25-99 11:54 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This has very good rhyme and meter. Hope that Lisa enjoyed this!
Gentle Soul
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2 posted 07-26-99 01:09 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

I like.. its sweet, and sounds nice too! hehe

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3 posted 07-26-99 10:17 AM       View Profile for Delores Hall   Email Delores Hall   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delores Hall

Very touching.
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4 posted 07-26-99 11:06 AM       View Profile for Angel_of_Music   Email Angel_of_Music   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel_of_Music

nice

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5 posted 07-26-99 11:12 AM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Walt

Very nicely ambivalent - each time I read it I saw a different perspective, the first time, it appeared you were leaving her, the next you were coming to her - it made me stop and really read it - and that's what poetry is all about. Nice job!
 
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