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My Heart of Hearts

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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 06-30-99 12:54 AM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

With matchless beauty and feline's grace
She strolls a gentle mile in my mind
Silk white skin and an angel's face
My innocent heart of hearts she finds

With mystic eyes and coal dark mane
She speaks words with lips red satin lace
Her voice calls a gentle spring rain
My heart of hearts pounds a frantic pace

With careful hands of charity
She turns the key to desire's door
The lock gives to her willingly
My heart of hearts will stand bared no more

Oh, bestow to me your sweet kiss
Set my fettered soul to soar
Enfold me with your kind caress
That my heart of hearts will be forever
Yours
© Copyright 1999 Andrew Scott - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 06-30-99 08:01 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Well done, Andrew ~
I like it....
Christina Myers
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a very lovely and loving poem. thank you for posting now I'll have a smile on my face all day...

-C
Honeybee
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"Oh, bestow to me your sweet kiss
Set my fettered soul to soar"
______________________________________

Sighs, this is beautiful and romantic, just the way I like it!
Alejandro
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With careful hands of charity
She turns the key to desire's door
The lock gives to her willingly
My heart of hearts will stand bared no more


very well spoken, inspirational.
Earl Brinkman
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5 posted 09-08-2010 12:40 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

I would have to agree with Alejandro that that third stanza has some magic in it.  `My heart of heart will standed barred no more` is a worthy line.
busysweetmom
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6 posted 10-27-2010 07:31 PM       View Profile for busysweetmom   Email busysweetmom   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for busysweetmom

I really enjoyed reading it.The flow was good.

 
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