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If I Sin

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IsabelleSkye
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0 posted 06-29-99 10:40 PM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for IsabelleSkye

If I Sin

If I sin
In my love
For you
So be it
Let the smell
Of brimstone's tang
Fill me
If I do wrong
Lay the blame
If loving you
Constitutes a sin
Let me burn
If yearning for your touch
Makes my soul impure
Point the finger
Cast the stone
If this love is so wrong
If I sin
In my love
For you
So be it
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Balladeer
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1 posted 06-29-99 10:50 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

If going after what we crave
Brands us as a sinner
They can lie us in a single grave.
What would you like for dinner?

(For a sinner, the way you write is heavenly)
Andrew Scott
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2 posted 06-29-99 11:06 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

I may not be the first to jump in, but I'll be there with a fine bottle of wine. My compliments to the chef.

Andrew
Colin
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3 posted 06-30-99 04:52 AM       View Profile for Colin   Email Colin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Colin

Is true love a sin? If so, I'm right there, sinning with you.... always.
YOUR Eric
Nan
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4 posted 06-30-99 09:24 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Izzy....
Eric has found you - What a man!!!
elvira
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5 posted 07-16-99 05:51 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

"Would I were free from this restraint, or else had hope to win her! Would she could make of me a saint or I of her a sinner!"...these borrowed words seem to be a fitting reply

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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart...


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Isabelle..
Excellent piece of work. It says a great deal in very few words. The flow has a life of it's own and everything just works together in this one. Bravo!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald
 
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