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Open Poetry #1

Night Rain

garret
New Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 7
Harrisville, N.H 03450

0 posted 1999-06-29 10:06 PM

I imagine the rain
on nighttime water.
Although I cannot see it
I know it is there.
I imagine each drop as
born in the sky that falls
to layer the surface
of the night pond below.
Falling, falling, from the sky
are so many.
The night rain besets on each surface
a tounge,
giving birth to drop, then drop.
I study the invisible sounds
and thoughts of an ending
I know soon comes
with rain falling
all around.
A boat unmored,
the nighttime water.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-06-29 10:14 PM

Very nice, I liked this immensely.

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Patience is a virtue, but virtue has never been one of my redeeming qualities.

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