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Night Rain

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garret
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0 posted 06-29-99 10:06 PM       View Profile for garret   Email garret   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for garret

I imagine the rain
on nighttime water.
Although I cannot see it
I know it is there.
I imagine each drop as
born in the sky that falls
to layer the surface
of the night pond below.
Falling, falling, from the sky
are so many.
The night rain besets on each surface
a tounge,
giving birth to drop, then drop.
I study the invisible sounds
and thoughts of an ending
I know soon comes
with rain falling
all around.
A boat unmored,
the nighttime water.
© Copyright 1999 garret - All Rights Reserved
DreamEvil
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1 posted 06-29-99 10:14 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Very nice, I liked this immensely.

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