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JuLiEt
Junior Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 44
Abbotsford,British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 1999-06-29 08:07 PM


Hearts pump fast
Walking slowly,
As to a steady beat
Breathe.

Turn the corner,
Look to see
All is clear
Breathe.

Find your senses,
Feel yourself shake,
Brace yourself,
Breathe.

Through the window
Across the way
Look inside
Breathe.

Face the horror,
Close your eyes,
Look and see
My gosh! I got a B!!

this is a cute one i just wrote about high school provincials, and teenage terror!

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~*JuLiEt*~

© Copyright 1999 JuLiEt - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
1 posted 1999-06-29 10:30 PM


Oh ya, I know what you mean. I do that same thing when I recieve my college grades :P
....can't stand that feeling..BLUK! Nice job, JuLiEt.

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