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Mike
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0 posted 1999-06-29 07:57 PM


My Rose, doth not thee feel the coursing in mine breast?
That hath remained since first our lips in passion pressed,
With fragrance of thy bloom, I am touched by thy desire,
I wait the night, to once again sate passion's fire
O' heaven's orb, next to thy grace, the stars above
Pale as the daffodil to rose of Eros' love,
Love, O' sweet love, I long the whisper of thy voice,
When thee arrives with setting sun I shall rejoice
Beneath canopy of stars, we shall e'er embrace
I yearn thy goddess kiss upon my mortal face
For I have met my Aphrodite, thou art her
My beauteous Rose that comes while day doth slumber,
Unto the gods above, I sing sweet song's reprise
For mortal with a goddess be, until the sun doth rise.

Sonnet (repost)

With voices of the nightengale, the bards they speak of love
Not with words of mortals, but thoughts from god's above
They speak of Helen's beauty, that launched a thousand ships
In vain I try to mimic, but speak with mortal lips
For I have met my Venus, she comes in still of night
Sweet flower of the heavens, outshines the welkin's light
I've supped her lips of rose' wine, caressed her in my arms
And tho', alas, a mortal be, have felt her goddess charms
Come to me my Dulcinea, thou beauty doth entwine
Entice me with your nectar sweet, with tastes of fragrant wine
Quench the yearnings deep inside, desires you instill
With pleasures of your satin bloom, mine passion cup you fill
Then softly steal into the night, amongst the rising mist
For I am thine, my heart doth feel, as if by heaven kissed.

© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-06-29 09:10 PM


Forsooth, noble knight thy poetry
has unloosened the wanton in me
I long to feel thy thorny prick
come hither sire, make it quick!

Absolutely wonderful poetry!

elvira
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2 posted 1999-07-16 08:41 PM


*sigh* simply lovely...hope you are still posting?

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Mike
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3 posted 1999-07-17 02:05 PM


occasionally...
thanks for the comment

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Hurricane Alley
4 posted 1999-07-17 03:14 PM


It seems to me that I like this kind of poetry! To the top, Sir Knight!
Sally S.
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5 posted 1999-07-17 04:49 PM


My!! That's good! Fooey, I wish I knew where to get all those nifty graphics...I'd post a beautiful flower right..... here! Well, imagine one....the poem is lovely.
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