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jfreak
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since 1999-06-17
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Yuma, AZ, USA

0 posted 1999-06-29 05:34 PM


My mind is a blur
With all the words
That come and stir
An inner purr
which then concurs
My heart is hers

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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 1999-06-29 06:07 PM


You are obviously in Love. Good for you and I felt this poem was short, but oh so sweet.
jfreak
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since 1999-06-17
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Yuma, AZ, USA
2 posted 1999-06-29 07:46 PM


not quite in love lost dreamer, but maybe one day, hopefully. she is very special to me. This is more in mind for my future bride than the young lady i am currently involved with. Maybe it will be for her, but not quite yet. Thanx for the comment.

Jfreak

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
3 posted 1999-06-29 10:37 PM


Lovely. Well, whomever "she"...turns out to be..."she" certainly will be...very lucky.
Very pretty poem.

Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-06-29 10:40 PM


purr-fection, JFreak!
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