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...weak and wanting...

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one voice
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since 06-29-99
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 06-29-99 01:20 PM       View Profile for one voice   Email one voice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for one voice

I remember seeing him and feeling weak and wanting.
He walked across the room and his mere movements put me in awe.
And he spoke to me-
his voice so low and dusky
I didn't know whether to weep or cross my legs...
So I slipped on his voice
just like a mink coat.
He kissed me so softly... I forgot where I was; I felt dizzy;
I was floating.
He stared in to my eyes as I stared into his, and I took it all in:
the new born eyes that bypass every color in hazel, the square jaw,
the dark brows,
the steady chin...
Two worlds collided that wonderful evening.
I fell in love with him just from the exciting energy
born from his gentle touch...
and I still love him dearly...
Secretly,
I wrap his love around me like a feather boa.
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1 posted 06-29-99 04:20 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Beautifully romantic. I love every word.
Krystal
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since 06-19-99
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Oh wow!! This one really got to me. I loved every word, too, like Balladeer commented. I especially liked...

"So I slipped on his voice
Just like a mink coat..."

and

"Secretly,
I wrap his love around me like a feather boa."

Wonderful images, wearing someone's love!! I loved it. Keep posting...you are very talented.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")
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