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one voice
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since 1999-06-29
Posts 38
Billings, MT USA

0 posted 1999-06-29 01:20 PM


I remember seeing him and feeling weak and wanting.
He walked across the room and his mere movements put me in awe.
And he spoke to me-
his voice so low and dusky
I didn't know whether to weep or cross my legs...
So I slipped on his voice
just like a mink coat.
He kissed me so softly... I forgot where I was; I felt dizzy;
I was floating.
He stared in to my eyes as I stared into his, and I took it all in:
the new born eyes that bypass every color in hazel, the square jaw,
the dark brows,
the steady chin...
Two worlds collided that wonderful evening.
I fell in love with him just from the exciting energy
born from his gentle touch...
and I still love him dearly...
Secretly,
I wrap his love around me like a feather boa.

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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
1 posted 1999-06-29 04:20 PM


Beautifully romantic. I love every word.
Krystal
Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA
2 posted 1999-06-29 04:48 PM


Oh wow!! This one really got to me. I loved every word, too, like Balladeer commented. I especially liked...

"So I slipped on his voice
Just like a mink coat..."

and

"Secretly,
I wrap his love around me like a feather boa."

Wonderful images, wearing someone's love!! I loved it. Keep posting...you are very talented.

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

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