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do angels fall without you there?

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IsabelleSkye
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0 posted 06-29-99 12:01 AM       View Profile for IsabelleSkye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for IsabelleSkye

Dark sun
Mountain sighs
Black gull cries
Close your eyes
Search inside
If you don't look
Does she still fly?
Painted wind
Raging sea
Aging moon
Can you break her?
Can you make her?
Night's so cold
Story's untold
Riddles unfold
Does she spread her wings
Listening to the earth as it sings?
If you walk away
Heart turned to stone
Does she fly all alone?
Does she fall without you there?
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1 posted 06-29-99 12:36 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Excellent, H. Your poem produces the perfect rhythym to make it hard-hitting and powerful.Nicely done.
Nan
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She never flies alone, my friend...
Tim
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Thank you for your words...
jfreak
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4 posted 06-29-99 12:47 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

I like this one, Isabelle. The point of self examination is really felt. I love it. Keep up the great work. outstanding rhythm.

Jfreak
 
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