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IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27
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0 posted 1999-06-29 12:01 PM


Dark sun
Mountain sighs
Black gull cries
Close your eyes
Search inside
If you don't look
Does she still fly?
Painted wind
Raging sea
Aging moon
Can you break her?
Can you make her?
Night's so cold
Story's untold
Riddles unfold
Does she spread her wings
Listening to the earth as it sings?
If you walk away
Heart turned to stone
Does she fly all alone?
Does she fall without you there?

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Balladeer
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1 posted 1999-06-29 12:36 PM


Excellent, H. Your poem produces the perfect rhythym to make it hard-hitting and powerful.Nicely done.
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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2 posted 1999-06-29 08:36 AM


She never flies alone, my friend...

Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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3 posted 1999-06-29 11:35 AM


Thank you for your words...
jfreak
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA
4 posted 1999-06-29 12:47 PM


I like this one, Isabelle. The point of self examination is really felt. I love it. Keep up the great work. outstanding rhythm.

Jfreak

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