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Haskins
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since 1999-06-26
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Dallas, TX

0 posted 1999-06-28 07:57 PM


What Morning Brings

The moonlight bathed the night in blue,
And, swimming through the silent sea,
I rode the waves into that gray
Horizon stretched in front of me.

The morning spread across the sky,
Like curtains to reveal the stage
And actors in this comedy,
Command performance in a cage.





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William Haskins
http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm

© Copyright 1999 Haskins - All Rights Reserved
Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
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1 posted 1999-06-28 08:40 PM


To me this is about a person trapped in their life. Am i close?
Haskins
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since 1999-06-26
Posts 85
Dallas, TX
2 posted 1999-06-28 08:58 PM


You are absolutely correct.

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William Haskins
http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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3 posted 1999-06-29 07:41 AM


Very well said, Haskins..
..and with the dawn of each morning comes a new beginning.

elvira
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 936
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4 posted 1999-07-17 01:07 AM


so well put...a joy to read and ponder

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