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Save the Best Till LastŠ

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Genea
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Save the Best Till LastŠ1998 Genea Parker

A long time ago, at a wedding
Before the evening had passed
A miracle happened; the guests said
“They saved the best till last.”

Two thousand years later
I prayed for a miracle each night
That I would find a lovely lady
To be my Mrs. Right.

I knew when I met you
I couldn’t let this chance pass.
I saved all my love for you
I saved the best till last.

You are that lady for me
I knew my dream had come true
I knew this the very day
I fell in love with you.

I’m glad you’re the woman
The one I loved enough to ask
To have a life with me
To save our best till last.
© Copyright 1999 Genea - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-28-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

wonderful sentiment! Good story well put together with a wonderful message. (other than that, it was so-so) Nicely done.
Genea
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Balladeer,

Thanks for the supportive comment. I promise to work on the so-so part. :-)

~Genea
 
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