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Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

0 posted 1999-06-28 02:31 AM


If I could see but one thing
I would fill my eyes with yours.
The cool green pools of you
Show me the thoughts your words obscure.
And when I close my eyes
We'll share the things you dream of as you sleep.
I'll peer inside your fantasy
To read your silent yearnings.
If I could hear but one thing
I would hear every word you say.
I'd let your words fill up my soul
To comfort me when you're away.
And when you whisper "I love you"
You'll have captured my heart for your own
Because the sound of your voice
Is sweeter than any I've ever known.

(*sigh* new, but reminiscent of the past)

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www.auburn.edu/~fergum1
~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~



© Copyright 1999 Mary Ferguson - All Rights Reserved
Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-06-28 02:51 AM


How awesome! You indeed have talent and I'm glad u became a member here I look forward to hearing ur poetry and hope u enjoy mine! Have a good week and good luck on ur new writings.

*******Augchic711*******

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-06-28 05:50 AM


Moonlight, shining bright, once again you show your worth tonight.

I'm glad you didn't sleep, solely for this piece of yourself. I hope you sleep in the arms of angels this night.

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 06-28-99).]

DreamEvil
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3 posted 1999-06-28 09:59 PM


This should be closer to the top.
Christina Myers
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since 1999-06-21
Posts 159

4 posted 1999-06-28 10:43 PM


Moonlight- lovely poem. I love "show me the thoughts of your words obscure.." there is just something so *poetic* about that...

-Christina

Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 1999-06-28 10:52 PM


Hmmm....this is best read in bed by candlelight..such romantic poetry! Welcome to the family. I look forward to reading more.



Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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6 posted 1999-06-29 12:00 PM


Beautiful! There is a song, "moonlight Becomes You". Well, it certainly becomes us having you as a member...and I'm glad.
Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA
7 posted 1999-06-29 12:44 PM


thank you all

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www.auburn.edu/~fergum1
~*Only when it is dark enough can you see the stars*~



ac
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 129
Cayey, PR - USA
8 posted 1999-06-29 02:39 PM


this is incredibly beautiful...very touching for something that is just a memory of the past...
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