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Edna Nelson
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since 1999-06-27
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0 posted 1999-06-27 11:50 PM


I should have dusted the furniture
and vacuumed the carpet;
But I got down in the floor and
played with my kids instead.

I should have washed the windows
and the laundry;
But I went to the park with my kids
instead.

I should have scrubbed the ring in the
tub and mopped the kitchen floor;
But I went downtown for ice cream with
my kids instead.

I should have done the shopping and cut
the grass;
But I'm grateful I spent the time with my
kids instead.

Edna L. Nelson

© Copyright 1999 Edna Nelson - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
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1 posted 1999-06-28 12:01 PM


this was nice yuh i have three kids but my problem is i cant get away from this poetry site and spend time with my kids instead. very true love the poem
Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-06-28 12:16 PM


Edna, welcome! Like you, I did those things and never regretted it! I often said I'd wash the windows when the kids were raised and gone...just now got around to it! My gosh the neighborhood has changed!



Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
3 posted 1999-06-28 12:43 PM


Bravo!!

My feelings exactly...... I can't get enough of mine. Now, if they'd just stop letting the cat out and mommy having to rescue him.....all would be well.

Nan
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4 posted 1999-06-28 10:42 AM


You're a welcome addition, Edna...
The good news is..
If you do a really good job at all of those "instead" things with them, they bring back their babies so you can continue to do even more "instead" things with THEM!!!



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 1999-06-28 11:18 AM


Thanks, Edna, for sharing with those of us who couldn't that which you were able. My priorities were messed up...now I'm focusing on my grandkids.
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