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sheba57 Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 64vincennes, in usa |
breathless there are times when with you, my love, that i find myself breathless. like when i watch you sleep, and i kiss you softly and touch your face. i find myself breathless at the sight of your beauty. then there are the times when i catch you watching me, and the look in you eyes says it all. you wear your love for me in those eyes, and i find myself breathless at my beauty reflected in them. other times i find my self apart from you, and i remember your feel and your scent. and i quiver, my body responding to what i know so well. again, breathless, i await our time together. the times i like best, though, are when we're together, and you are loving me. holding me close and are one with me. you whisper to me those secret words leaving me breathless through and through. i smile, you smile, and we are one. ~ celtic rose ~ |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
this poem moved me, celtic rose. Bless you for writing it and double bless you for posting it. This explains what I feel so much for someone....I mean, albeit we're just friends (for now!!! ahaaa!) but god, you captured it on the nail. The images and the feelings...powerful indeed. Applause! Applause! -Christina |
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sheba57 Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 64vincennes, in usa |
thanks again, christina. would you believe that i wrote that for a man i have yet to meet? that's right - we have been corresponding, chatting, emailing and phoning since last october and are meeting next month for 4 days in jackson hole, wyoming! good luck with your friend and maybe one day ..... ~ celtic rose ~ |
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