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what one doesn't know can hurt others

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speare
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roanoke, texas, usa


0 posted 06-27-99 08:04 PM       View Profile for speare   Email speare   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for speare

alone i am,
alone i'll be.
without your love
for eternity.
you left me here
to start again,
all by myself
without a friend.
my heart you broke,
my life you took,
but still i melt
when you chance to look.
no one can take your place.
i'll always have this hole.
groping for you in the dark,
and you don't even know.
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Craig
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1 posted 06-27-99 08:34 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

This is very good

You put a lot of feeling into your work that shows upon reading.
Poet deVine
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2 posted 06-28-99 12:20 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Is your first name Shakes?

I liked this..there's a lot of depth in your poem, I've felt this way many times.

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Sally S.
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Well done. You could feel the sadness.
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