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Last Summer

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Moonlight
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Auburn, Alabama USA


0 posted 06-27-99 03:38 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

If I'm still for long enough
I remember last summer
I ache when I still feel
How your touch smoothed my skin
If I dream at night
I remember last summer
How content I was knowing
That you were so near to me.
If I see your picture
I remember last summer
And cry, wishing I could
Somehow have you back with me.
When I close my eyes
I remember last summer
And I can see your eyes
Still peering into mine.
If i am alive
I'll always remember last summer,
Because I had all I needed
When you were with me.

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Haskins
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since 06-26-99
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1 posted 06-27-99 04:54 PM       View Profile for Haskins   Email Haskins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Haskins's Home Page   View IP for Haskins

I like your poem.



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Alysia
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american falls, idaho usa


2 posted 06-27-99 05:15 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

It makes me stop breathing until the last word is uttered and only then can I sigh. You're poem is so beautiful and content that I feel as if I'm sitting under a summer sky with the one I love and remembering all that made me fall in love with him. Thanks.

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~ Alysia*
DreamEvil
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3 posted 06-27-99 08:35 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I love everything you write, I wonder why the Summer ended, and how you became so sad.
Nimrod the Hunter
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4 posted 06-27-99 08:47 PM       View Profile for Nimrod the Hunter   Email Nimrod the Hunter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nimrod the Hunter

Beautiful, very beautiful. You have a strong sense of imagery which I admire.
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