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Moonlight
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

0 posted 1999-06-27 03:38 PM


If I'm still for long enough
I remember last summer
I ache when I still feel
How your touch smoothed my skin
If I dream at night
I remember last summer
How content I was knowing
That you were so near to me.
If I see your picture
I remember last summer
And cry, wishing I could
Somehow have you back with me.
When I close my eyes
I remember last summer
And I can see your eyes
Still peering into mine.
If i am alive
I'll always remember last summer,
Because I had all I needed
When you were with me.

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© Copyright 1999 Mary Ferguson - All Rights Reserved
Haskins
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since 1999-06-26
Posts 85
Dallas, TX
1 posted 1999-06-27 04:54 PM


I like your poem.



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William Haskins
http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm

Alysia
Junior Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 35
american falls, idaho usa
2 posted 1999-06-27 05:15 PM


It makes me stop breathing until the last word is uttered and only then can I sigh. You're poem is so beautiful and content that I feel as if I'm sitting under a summer sky with the one I love and remembering all that made me fall in love with him. Thanks.

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~ Alysia*

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-06-27 08:35 PM


I love everything you write, I wonder why the Summer ended, and how you became so sad.
Nimrod the Hunter
Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 60

4 posted 1999-06-27 08:47 PM


Beautiful, very beautiful. You have a strong sense of imagery which I admire.
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