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Lost Love

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Susan C.
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since 06-27-99
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0 posted 06-27-99 02:29 PM       View Profile for Susan C.   Email Susan C.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan C.

Tell me how it feels
To be in such control
Unfortunately,
It has always been this way.
I was young and senseless
I bet you never thought you'd see this day.

The day I finally say, "Goodbye,
Farewell, good riddens, it's time for me to leave..."
Of course there will be things I miss
We'll need our time to grieve.

In our hearts we both know
This can't continue on.
The love has faded, trust is gone...
This is why i've been so withdrawn.

And so, let's keep this short but kind
I would like to stay your friend.
You'll always be a part of me--
Right to the bitter end.


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Krystal
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since 06-19-99
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Shelton,WA USA


1 posted 06-27-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

You captured a part of so many relationships that are coming to an end... good going!

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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Susan C.
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2 posted 06-27-99 03:41 PM       View Profile for Susan C.   Email Susan C.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan C.

Thanx "Krystal". I gave it a try. I only write what I feel.

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Susan C.
Krystal
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3 posted 06-28-99 02:03 AM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

I can relate, I do the same ... but I think you did an excellent job! Thanks for sharing it...

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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