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MuseFaire
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0 posted 06-27-99 11:20 AM       View Profile for MuseFaire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MuseFaire

It starts, slow at first
building quietly in my heart
until I open
and find your face in radiance
eyes connecting, flashing daybreak
and I am lost-
stumbling
in the thought of you.
I try to focus, to pay attention to detail
but all I can hear is the beating of my heart
all I can think of is your hand
your arm
your fingers brushing my skin
and pulling me into your distance
so that finally,
my mind can stop thinking
and know, for once and for all
what it feels like to be close to you.

-The Muse-


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"Thought is the greatest of pleasures..." - Gustave Flaubert
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Genea
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1 posted 06-27-99 12:55 PM       View Profile for Genea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Genea

Has a romantic feel to it. Nice.

Christina Myers
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since 06-21-99
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2 posted 06-27-99 02:30 PM       View Profile for Christina Myers   Email Christina Myers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Christina Myers's Home Page   View IP for Christina Myers

I enjoyed this one too, Muse. Very passionate and moving. And I can definitely relate.
I love- :your fingers brushing my skin and pulling me into your distance:

very very nice

-Christina
Krystal
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since 06-19-99
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3 posted 06-27-99 02:51 PM       View Profile for Krystal   Email Krystal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krystal

I really liked this, and I too, can relate. Nicely done... beautiful ...

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Shannon D. Montgomery
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MuseFaire
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4 posted 06-27-99 08:53 PM       View Profile for MuseFaire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MuseFaire

well thank you everyone! I was nervous over posting but I see I was just being a ninny.

this is such a pleasant forum....I'm glad I found it!~

--the muse--




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"Thought is the greatest of pleasures..." - Gustave Flaubert
Balladeer
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5 posted 06-27-99 09:12 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

YOU'RE glad? We're estatic! What a romantic person you are. Wonderful!
 
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