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MuseFaire
Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 12


0 posted 1999-06-27 11:20 AM


It starts, slow at first
building quietly in my heart
until I open
and find your face in radiance
eyes connecting, flashing daybreak
and I am lost-
stumbling
in the thought of you.
I try to focus, to pay attention to detail
but all I can hear is the beating of my heart
all I can think of is your hand
your arm
your fingers brushing my skin
and pulling me into your distance
so that finally,
my mind can stop thinking
and know, for once and for all
what it feels like to be close to you.

-The Muse-


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"Thought is the greatest of pleasures..." - Gustave Flaubert

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Genea
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 321
USA
1 posted 1999-06-27 12:55 PM


Has a romantic feel to it. Nice.


Christina Myers
Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159

2 posted 1999-06-27 02:30 PM


I enjoyed this one too, Muse. Very passionate and moving. And I can definitely relate.
I love- :your fingers brushing my skin and pulling me into your distance:

very very nice

-Christina

Krystal
Member
since 1999-06-19
Posts 140
Shelton,WA USA
3 posted 1999-06-27 02:51 PM


I really liked this, and I too, can relate. Nicely done... beautiful ...

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Shannon D. Montgomery
("Krystal")

MuseFaire
Junior Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 12

4 posted 1999-06-27 08:53 PM


well thank you everyone! I was nervous over posting but I see I was just being a ninny.

this is such a pleasant forum....I'm glad I found it!~

--the muse--




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"Thought is the greatest of pleasures..." - Gustave Flaubert

Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 1999-06-27 09:12 PM


YOU'RE glad? We're estatic! What a romantic person you are. Wonderful!
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