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Rainy Day in Our World

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sheba57
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Rainy Day in Our World

Walking in the
rain holding hands,
I look in your
eyes. You smile.
Diamonds in your
hair. We run like
children - laughing.
Under the tree, you
hold me close. We
kiss - breaths mingle.
No one is this
world but us. A
flash, a crash, & our
heartbeats match.
We are as one.
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Nice to have you with us, sheba...


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Christina Myers
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the simplicity in the poem is quite lovely...
thank you.


-Christina

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And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda
sheba57
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christina - thanks for the kind words AND the quote from neruda. i discovered him quite by accident while browsing for poetry books in barnes & noble one day. had never heard of him but enjoyed the one i bought. reminds me - i loaned it out and have yet to receive it back.
Wolfgang
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I am an old romantic at heart so I cannot help but like your poem.
Nicely done.
sheba57
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5 posted 06-28-99 04:13 AM       View Profile for sheba57   Email sheba57   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sheba57

thank you wolfgang - nothing wrong with being a romantic in my book - old or no.

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