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sheba57
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since 06-27-99
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vincennes, in usa


0 posted 06-27-99 01:58 AM       View Profile for sheba57   Email sheba57   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sheba57

i love you
i want to hold you and be held by you
i want to feel your mouth on my breast
i want to feel your hands on my back pulling me into you
i want to feel your skin against mine
i want to feel your passion
i want to take you within me
i want to keep you here in this place we have made
i want you to love me.

~ celtic rose ~

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~ celtic rose ~
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angelfire'99
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1 posted 06-27-99 02:50 AM       View Profile for angelfire'99   Email angelfire'99   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for angelfire'99

I like your style, I can feel the words as if they are real. Awesome.
Wolfgang
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since 05-24-99
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2 posted 06-27-99 12:08 PM       View Profile for Wolfgang   Email Wolfgang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wolfgang's Home Page   View IP for Wolfgang

Hi sheba57.
I think you will get a lot more responses if you title your poems. For this one, why not "I want to...". There are many (including me) who often skip untitled works and go on to the next one.
Just an idea.
sheba57
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3 posted 06-27-99 08:48 PM       View Profile for sheba57   Email sheba57   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sheba57

thanks for the tip, wolfgang. i usually do title my pieces - just couldn't come up with something that i liked for this one. thanks again.

celtic rose
Christina Myers
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4 posted 06-27-99 10:10 PM       View Profile for Christina Myers   Email Christina Myers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Christina Myers's Home Page   View IP for Christina Myers

I love your stuff, celtic rose... it has a longing in it that I can readily identify with..

sad to say sometimes! lol

-C
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