We all gladly welcome you to our fold I personally like your style - Your use of archaic language will surely find some followers here - and your message is delivered quite adeptly through your repeated use of personification... I like it... Do make yourself comfy here
yes, I concur- this is a lovely show of writing... something utterly timeless about it...I can almost imagine the faery queen and her followers hiding in the trees... even if that wasn't your intention
------------------ And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda
american falls, idaho usa
Christina, Fabulous thought. Even though I never even imagined such life living in my poem, now as I read it again, it does exist. Fairies are so magical and hidden, that it almost takes my poem to a deeper forest of imagination and thought. Thanks for opening my eyes to that!
------------------ ~ Alysia*
Yuma, AZ, USA