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Alysia
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since 06-26-99
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0 posted 06-26-99 07:34 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

* Realism speaks in a subtle tone.
Mine ears are harkened to its call.

   "Anon fair child!  Wilst thou go with me?"

Mild wind fancies reconciliation and plays with locks of my hair.
Trees stand erect above me.
All is
Mute.
........
What is that I hear?  Do you hear the sunlight fall upon the
iridescent leaves?

  "Run child!  Deep into the trees.  Wait there for me!  I'll arrive presently!"

Night secludes mine eyes.
I am covered in a black mist...speak not,
for he will find you.

Let him search, for I am gone,
Swallowed by darkness.*

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~ Alysia*
© Copyright 1999 Alysia - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 06-26-99 08:18 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

We all gladly welcome you to our fold
I personally like your style - Your use of archaic language will surely find some followers here - and your message is delivered quite adeptly through your repeated use of personification... I like it... Do make yourself comfy here



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Poet deVine
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2 posted 06-26-99 08:21 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like the style and the content of your poem! Feels as though I should read it whilst listening to harpsicord music!

Welcome to the group (the family really). I look forward to more from you.

Alysia
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since 06-26-99
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american falls, idaho usa


3 posted 06-26-99 08:38 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

To both of you...thanks. I look forward to posting more, as time permits.

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~ Alysia*
Christina Myers
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4 posted 06-26-99 10:20 PM       View Profile for Christina Myers   Email Christina Myers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Christina Myers's Home Page   View IP for Christina Myers

yes, I concur- this is a lovely show of writing... something utterly timeless about it...I can almost imagine the faery queen and her followers hiding in the trees...
even if that wasn't your intention

-C

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And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda
Alysia
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5 posted 06-28-99 09:48 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

Christina,
Fabulous thought. Even though I never even imagined such life living in my poem, now as I read it again, it does exist. Fairies are so magical and hidden, that it almost takes my poem to a deeper forest of imagination and thought. Thanks for opening my eyes to that!

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~ Alysia*
jfreak
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6 posted 06-29-99 12:50 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

You are definately gifted. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. You are a great poet.

Jfreak
Alysia
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7 posted 06-29-99 01:30 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

*blush* thanks jfreak. might i add that you're poetry is also quite intriguing...continue to post it!
Alysia
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8 posted 06-29-99 01:30 PM       View Profile for Alysia   Email Alysia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alysia

*blush* thanks jfreak. might i add that you're poetry is also quite intriguing...continue to post it!

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~ Alysia*
Tim
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9 posted 06-29-99 02:09 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tim

Me thinkst thou art a maiden fair
Who speaks with beauty and grand flair....
WhenDovesCry
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10 posted 06-29-99 08:34 PM       View Profile for WhenDovesCry   Email WhenDovesCry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for WhenDovesCry

Alysia...
I love the style...it draws you in...a whole little world is created as you read...I love it...
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